What was your favourite sentence? Did you like them before or after I changed them?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 28, 2020
Writing - Sentence fixing.
This week for writing I had to choose three sentences to fix of of a Doc the teacher gave me and make them sound better. Here is what I made:
What was your favourite sentence? Did you like them before or after I changed them?
What was your favourite sentence? Did you like them before or after I changed them?
Predictions - Reading
For reading this week I had to read a story and write 8 predictions during the story. Here is the predictions I wrote.
Predictions
Have you ever made a prediction?
Predictions
Have you ever made a prediction?
Maths - Reversibility
For Math this week I learn't reversibility with division. I made a screen castify of me explaining reversibility. Here it is:
Have you ever done reversibility with division?
Wednesday, May 27, 2020
Lucky Dip
This week on Monday I had to do a writing work shop with Mrs Earl. I had to write a chunk of THIS link I chose chunk 5. Which is the time 1.34 - 1.53. Here is my chunk I wrote.
Chunk 5
An Orchestra of dark sounds played in the sky: wind howled, thunder boomed and rain crashed. Umbrellas were urgently unfolded by panicked seaside visitors. Lightning flashed in the sky as Lola cheerlessly looked back at the arcade. Lola seized her moment, she returned to the arcade. Clutching her last coin. Blatantly ignoring the “Keep Out” sign. The Stranger, who was running the arcade, hid so she wouldn’t see her. She tripped and her last coin slipped out of her hand and rolled under the machine. The teddy Bashed against the window.
I Hope you enjoyed my chunk of writing.
Chunk 5
An Orchestra of dark sounds played in the sky: wind howled, thunder boomed and rain crashed. Umbrellas were urgently unfolded by panicked seaside visitors. Lightning flashed in the sky as Lola cheerlessly looked back at the arcade. Lola seized her moment, she returned to the arcade. Clutching her last coin. Blatantly ignoring the “Keep Out” sign. The Stranger, who was running the arcade, hid so she wouldn’t see her. She tripped and her last coin slipped out of her hand and rolled under the machine. The teddy Bashed against the window.
I Hope you enjoyed my chunk of writing.
Thursday, May 14, 2020
Math - Graph
Hey and welcome back for math's this week. For maths this week we had to make a scatter graph And write 3 - 4 statements about it. Here is my Graph:

I hope you like it. What do you know about scatter graphs?
I hope you like it. What do you know about scatter graphs?
Writing - Narrative
Hey and welcome back to my blog. For writing this week I had to pick a prompt and write a story of of that prompt here is the plan and story:
Hope you liked my story. What was your favorite sentence?
Hope you liked my story. What was your favorite sentence?
Reading-Lime scooters
Hey and welcome back to my blog. For Reading this week I had to read an article of my choice and then do a 3-2-1 DLO on it. Here is what I made:
I hope you enjoyed reading my DLO about E-Scooters. Did You notice each paragraph was the colour of a E-Scooter?
I hope you enjoyed reading my DLO about E-Scooters. Did You notice each paragraph was the colour of a E-Scooter?
Friday, May 8, 2020
Reading
Hello and welcome back. For reading this week I had to do this thing. Here it is:

I hope you like it. Whats some of your favourite authors?
I hope you like it. Whats some of your favourite authors?
Maths - Probability
Hello and welcome back. For Math this week I had to do probability I made a graph on what things came up the most. Here it is:

Hope you enjoyed. What Do you know about probability?
Hope you enjoyed. What Do you know about probability?
Writing - Poems
Hello and welcome back. For writing this week I had to write my own poem about what ever I wanted. I chose Twilight, this is the poem I wrote:
I hope you enjoyed my poem. what was your favourite line.
Artistic Photos
Hey and Welcome back. Today my mum and I went on a scavenger hunt around the house and took artistic pictures of certain items, I made a collage of some of my favourites here you go:
Did you Like My pictures? If you want to, try guess what some of them are.
Thanks for Reading.
Did you Like My pictures? If you want to, try guess what some of them are.
Thanks for Reading.
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