This week on Monday I had to do a writing work shop with Mrs Earl. I had to write a chunk of THIS link I chose chunk 5. Which is the time 1.34 - 1.53. Here is my chunk I wrote.
Chunk 5
An Orchestra of dark sounds played in the sky: wind howled, thunder boomed and rain crashed. Umbrellas were urgently unfolded by panicked seaside visitors. Lightning flashed in the sky as Lola cheerlessly looked back at the arcade. Lola seized her moment, she returned to the arcade. Clutching her last coin. Blatantly ignoring the “Keep Out” sign. The Stranger, who was running the arcade, hid so she wouldn’t see her. She tripped and her last coin slipped out of her hand and rolled under the machine. The teddy Bashed against the window.
I Hope you enjoyed my chunk of writing.
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