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Thursday, June 11, 2020

JE1 W9 T2

Hello And Welcome to my blog, today I will be showing You what I wrote for JE1. This time JE1 was a bit different because Mrs Earl gave us a chunk instead of us choosing our chunk. THIS is the short movie we watched. I got given the time 1.27 - 2.22. Our three challenges were to write a Adverbial Phrase, A Hyphen  and a Rhetorical Question Here is my Chunk of writing: 

Chunk 1    Partly Cloudy

High in the stratosphere, there were Cloud-moulders. They created cute puppies and soft kittens for storks to pick up and take to owners. Gus was one of those Cloud-moulders but his talents were different. He created hazardous  animals. The stork that picked those animals up was Peck. Peck tried his hardest to act happy at today’s animal even though it thought Peck was a snack. He struggled to fly off with the crocodile. As Peck flew off one of his feathers landed on Gus’ nose. 

How will Peck cope with all these harmful animals?


I hope you liked my writing. What Challenge do you think was easiest?

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