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Thursday, June 25, 2020

JE1 Writing

For this week we watched Take Me Home It was a cute film about a girl and a puppy. The chunk Mrs Earl gave me was Chunk 8. My three writing challenges were to Drench my writing in what Abbie sees, Add Passive voice and Similes  Here is my Writing: 

 
Did you like my writing? What sentence is your favourite?
 

 


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