JE1 - Writing T2 Wk8

Hello and welcome back to my blog. Sorry I am posting this a bit late. This is my writing from last weeks JE1 writing group. I watched a VIDEO with the rest of the group and chose a chunk to write about. I had 3 challenges to finish I had to: Write a complex sentence, Write a adverb  and Alliteration. Here is my chunk of writing: 

Chunk 6    Kitbull

After the rain stopped, Kit cautiously came out of her hiding spot. She lay down on an old rubbish bin and something bright caught her eye. An old orange bottle cap. She leaped down to play with it, she tapped and tipped it between her soft, little  paws. She whacked it over to Bull’s cage near her. He didn’t budge, Kit padded over to him. Poor Bull! He was wheezing and his body was covered in raw, red scratches. Kit clambered into his crate. Bull Growled, Kit contemplated leaving and going back to her hiding spot. But she stayed and cared for him.

I hope you liked my writing. what was your favourite sentence?